Oompapa~
I'm loving this song! It has a light and fluffy feel to it that makes me think of some sort of background track to a older Final Fantasy game!
The drums that started at 2:01 I think were a nice touch because I feel it gave a nice break from the more repetitive beats from them. I also loved the part at 1:29. It was kind of unexpected (to me at least) and despite it being short it was sweet.
Transition at 1:00 was great! I thought it was nice that you could only hear a few things going on and then it started to build up into more of a layered piece. I think it was interesting listening to what was going on around in there.
Love the ending! Not cliche at all actually. It was simple and effective and I think it was really nice to just end it instead of making a huge finale that droned on and got everyone bored! It made it so the listener knew the song was going to end and they don't have to skip the rest of the song because it is short and isn't going to make them wait.
Just too bad it's so short! C=> I would love to see it have been longer. I think if this was built on much more it would be even better! Not saying it wasn't in the first place, but you get what I mean!